Below you will find my drafts to my research report.

Going into this research report was pretty hard to find resources and write about them, after writing so many different research papers, this has to be one of the best I have had in awhile. With all the concepts that we learned in the classroom really helped me set it up and gather all the information required to complete this report.
This is my first draft to my Major Assignment #2
And here’s my work cited page
After getting feedback from both fellow students in class, as well as my professor. I have made a much improved draft that is much better than the first one, with all the assignments if there was more time available you would’ve seen much better drafts to a very well done papers. After all this is the amount of work that could have been done in the time provided and it is well done.

Below you will find the second draft to my research report.
After taking feedback from my professor and peers, I editing my report to make it better. I have now included my research and resources in one document that is linked below.
I think its convenient to have your work cited sources as a part of your major assignment, instead of having it as a separate document. Other than that, I think your assignment was very interesting, great job!
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I enjoyed how you described project-based learning as an enhancement, nice paper.
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Try incorporating your work cited page with the major assignment. And also I liked the way you give examples on how great teachers relay information to their students.
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Overall nice paper, but I agree with Nick and Isha about the work cited page.
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