Below you will find my drafts for my first assignment.
Doing this assignment taught me a lot about planning out and outlining for my papers, it’s never going to be perfect as you can see I had 2 drafts of it. If there was more time this page would’ve had a lot drafts, and it still won’t be perfect.
This is my first draft of Major Assignment #1
There will always be times where you will fail at doing something, from my first draft to the second one I have improved a lot so here’s my second draft!! (Reflection Included)
After this assignment one thing I would do differently is plan out and outline everything that will be going into my paper, so that I have a better understanding of what to write. As well spend more time on the process of writing and planning.
Khalid Daraghmeh Portfolio 
I like the approach you used, it immediately got my attention. I feel like it is a little too casual and some of the word choice can be exchanged with others. Overall, the reader can easily understand what you are saying.
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I like how you started off with a setting that we as the readers were able to relate to, which led to be more engaged in your writing. You talk a lot about what you learned from these readings, you could add more of how it helped you? Is your view on writing different, do you incorporate some of these in your writing?
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I enjoyed reading your assignment. It’s very well informative.
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Khalid, I enjoyed reading this assignment. I liked the way you incorporated what you have learned so far in the class as well as what you hope to learn. You give great examples of genre from the articles which can really be helpful to someone who is reading this piece not having a complete idea of what genre is. You also did an excellent job of really grabbing the readers attention which is crucial to being successful in the writing world.
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